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You left me out in the cold to freeze
After you stole my heart and nearly shattered me.
I will not go back down this road again,
But it is a long way that leads back home.

I refuse to lie down in this grave you have dug for me
While I still have some of my love to give.
But nobody wants you when you're broken,
Nobody wants you when you're black and blue.

Mr. Doctor can you fix me?
Or is it too risky?

Please Mr. Doctor, I will take any risk.
I want to come in from the cold,
And feel the warmth of joy within my soul.
Can you put back the light in my eyes,
So I can see the way home?

I think I am going to need a second opinion
Because the pills do not take me high enough.
All these stitches cannot mend a smile,
Or put the pieces of my heart back together.

Please Mr. Doctor can your fix me?
Or am I unfixable?
Hope you enjoy the poem. Any advice on my writing would be appreciated!
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Emily62507 May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is even better than when i read it the first time :D
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Lissy1995 May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!!
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